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Homer's Fight Club
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Views: 47
Comments: 4
Created 2 years, 3 weeks ago
Edited 1 year, 10 months ago
Category: TV Episode
Genres: Comedy
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Dan Minich (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Excellent spec script! A couple notes: you use "man" and "suit man" starting on page 13, but both seem to be the cleaner - why not just call him "cleaner;" and on page 24 Moe goes to talk to Lenny, who is outside the bar - I think you need to change to an Ext. scene heading at that point (unless I misunderstood what is happening).
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Stephen Adams (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Dan, thanks for your comments/feedback. I'll make the changes. I'm submitting this for the ABC/Disney competition. Hopefully it's good enough to have a shot.
Dan Minich (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Good luck Stephen. I think you have a good shot with this script.
Geoffrey Preudhomme (Sent 1 month, 2 weeks ago)
I loved it!
  • (5/5 stars)