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The Hard-Headed Steeling
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Views: 60
Comments: 4
Created 2 years, 2 weeks ago
Edited 2 years, 2 weeks ago
Category: Audio Drama
Genres: Drama, Historical
Key Words: Ulster Cycle
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CENSORED (Sent 2 years, 2 weeks ago)
Ian, I loved the narrators' parts.
The only word I don't like is 'candle,' not bright enough; lightning bolt maybe?
I really like Fithel's "No, you are too apt to blame the pleadings of other men; plead for thyself." What a GREAT sentence.
All of the story is clever and well thought out.
Keep-up this writing!
CENSORED (Sent 2 years, 2 weeks ago)
I loved it! Intelligent!
  • (5/5 stars)
ORIGINATOR
Ian F White (Sent 2 years, 2 weeks ago)
Thanks for the praise.
Can't claim most of it as my own though.
The story is one of the Ulster Cycle tales.
All I did was convert it into an Audio-Play format by creating the narrators, giving speaking parts, structuring it etc. So, actually, apart from most of the 'words' of the story, I did all the rest =)
It's the format side I'm interested in feedback for as well as the story.
I'll reite up some of the other tales at some point; The Shattering Cup and The Bell Branch.
Cheers
Ian
ORIGINATOR
Ian F White (Sent 2 years, 2 weeks ago)
Following a critique by a chap from Brokensea.com (audioplay specialists), I have re-written the script. It now runs to 9 pages.
Cheers
Ian