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Sherlock Holmes: The Final Problem
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Views: 20
Comments: 10
Created 1 year, 7 months ago
Edited 6 months, 2 weeks ago
Category: Stage Play
Genres: Crime
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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
We don't need the 'act I' heading -- it'll be better as just a 1 act play. It's too short to split, and nothing interesting happens half way through.

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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Also, should we shorten the opening V/O? It's a bit boring without anything happening on stage.

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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
How will we do the train speeding through the station? We could nick the illusion from 'Oliver!' -- Someone can run past behind an obstacle with the smoke machine (steam).

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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
If we do do it 2 act, finish here (HOLMES: we must travel to Geneva.)

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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
You haven't finished, have you? As a co-writer, I forbid you from ending it on a V/O unless it's insanely effective. However, this is not.

I still say Watson should narrate the climax live.

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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
If you're there, Conor, REPLY! Thanks!

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Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Or Drew.
Drew Bristow (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Aye up lass, Ich habe keine iede was du u Conor habe gesprochen
Ben Smith (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
They're only 'lousy comments' because you weren't replying (I thought you were there -- it said 'active' when it wasn't).
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Conor Litten (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
By the way, I think you mean "Ich hatte kein Idee was du und Conor gesagt haben."

Or something like that.