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Forbidden Love
(Based on 6 ratings)
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Views: 88
Comments: 13
Created 3 years, 6 months ago
Edited 3 years, 2 months ago
Category: Feature Film
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
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Comments
Antara (Sent 3 years, 5 months ago)
Nice screenplay, very entertaining, I can't watit to see where you go with it, a few spelling errors, but nice.
Amy B (Sent 3 years, 5 months ago)
-waves-

ITS AMAY!!!
i liked it cause i edit it. and its good. =]
  • (4/5 stars)
David Johnson (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
Awesome so far!
Great read!
David Johnson (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
I loved it!
  • (5/5 stars)
Earl Thompson (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
You do not have proper scene headings, and the grammars are terrible.
I'm afraid you need to get yourself a screenwriting book and read it;
you need a lot of help with grammars, punctuations and spellings.
Antara (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
It was just okay.
  • (3/5 stars)
Dawn Chapman (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
Now I understand why R retaliated on your script Earl, perhaps a little more explanation and teaching with your wise words would have helped here.

Earl does make some sense R.

To Mike. I like the script, and will show you a few edits, so to aid you on your script writing voyage.

Dawn
Dawn Chapman (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
Story is good, needs some edits.

D
  • (3/5 stars)
D. A. Washington (Sent 3 years, 4 months ago)
Great storyline, Mike. As said above, it can use some refinement, but over all, I really like it.

Keep writing....

D.A.
  • (4/5 stars)
Abdul Aliyu (Sent 3 years, 3 months ago)
Great story line ensure you get a second eyes to look into the punctuations and editing.Kudos
Melanie Foster (Sent 3 years, 2 months ago)
Not so sure what you are trying to create here?
What ever your doing with it, good luck.
Kristin Taylor (Sent 3 years, 1 month ago)
it's okay to me, but a little twilightish....still it's an okay story.
Kristin Taylor (Sent 3 years, 1 month ago)
It was just okay.
  • (3/5 stars)