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Nothing here right now.
the gang
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Views: 65
Comments: 6
Created 2 years, 6 months ago
Edited 11 hours, 34 minutes ago
Category: Feature Film
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Earl Thompson (Sent 2 years, 4 months ago)
First of all, you're starting your story with common letters. When you introduce a character, their names should be in capitals, they should be given an age, and a brief description. You have Fatina in the action line, and FATNAH when it comes to dialogue. Remember that screenplays are visual; you're talking about what people said about a school. How would the audience what is being said about a school when you're writing it in the action line? I'm sorry, but you're not doing this thing right. If you really want to write a screenplay, I suggest you get the Screenwriter's Bible, by David Trottier.
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shanilahnilah (Sent 2 years, 4 months ago)
thank you mark mccoy for your comment it is really encouraging and it is giving me a hope against hoping. God bless you.
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shanilahnilah (Sent 2 years, 4 months ago)
Earl Thompson, thank you so much for your comment,it is frank, developing,educating, the examples make me understand the errors i comitted and make them right. the references help me acquire more knowlege which improves my skills in script writting thank you .please keep reading my script am impressed. God bless you.
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shanilahnilah (Sent 2 years, 3 months ago)
Earl would you please recomend some useful resources online that are free because i cannot get screenwriters bible,by David Troiter. because i donothave that kind of money
mark mccoy (Sent 2 years, 3 months ago)
Do you have a library at your school if so.They should have books on writing a screenplay.Copy a few pages to help you understand the format.But the story itself I do like.
Ayokunle Falomo (Sent 2 years, 1 month ago)
I don't see any improvement in this script... why?