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Demas
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Views: 60
Comments: 10
Created 2 years, 3 weeks ago
Edited 1 year, 10 months ago
Category: Feature Film
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David Hof (Sent 2 years, 2 weeks ago)
Freakin awesome Dan
David Hof (Sent 2 years, 2 weeks ago)
Great work brother
Robbie Lewis (Sent 2 years, 1 week ago)
Awesome opening, but you need to break that opening up into two to three line spaced paragraphs. The most important thing in writing screenplays is CLARITY. If a producer sees you start writing a scene jumbled like that, he WILL put your screenplay down after the first three lines. He'll think you're an amateur. You're not writing a novel. It's called a SCREEN PLAY.
David Hof (Sent 2 years, 6 days ago)
Revision: 727 wow thats alot thanks for the hard work brother
did you see the color test we did with James Steele? He looks good what do you think as Johnny?
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James Steele (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
I think you are doing a great job Dan! I like it
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David Hof (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
OOOOHH man whats next?????
Zach Hanson (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
I read a couple pages and was hooked. Good work
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Dan Olds (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Thanks Zach. This is just the first draft so hopefully it will get much better over the next few months. This film is going to be shot this summer in South Dakota.
David Hof (Sent 1 year, 10 months ago)
Pretty awesome very cool brother... great work
cant wait to start filming it
John 11:25-26

Dave
Loukas Papas (Sent 1 year, 10 months ago)
Dan,

1st draft is better then most others I've read! :)

1 Corinthians 15:58 (The Message)

58With all this going for us, my dear, dear friends, stand your ground. And don't hold back. Throw yourselves into the work of the Master, confident that nothing you do for him is a waste of time or effort.

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