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Eggs
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Comments: 1
Comments: 1
By Garrett C
Created 2 years, 4 days ago
Edited 1 year, 11 months ago
Category: Short Film
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Eggs
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A red clock sits on the nightstand. Next to the sleeping man ........
should not be any ( egg carton......) should be
An open egg carton reveal one cracked egg
One more thing it should read.
MAN
(muttering)
C'est la ...
You should read between 5 and 10 screenplays before you write your own.
Sorry that was hard for me to read. Keep on reading. The only way to learn is to read. Good luck.