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Orphaned- Pilot
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Views: 121
Comments: 13
Created 1 year, 11 months ago
Edited 1 year, 3 weeks ago
Category: TV Pilot
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Kinsey Hallaway (Sent 1 year, 10 months ago)
Finally done I think. I forgot a scene at the end, but it's in there now.
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Andrew Del Rosario (Sent 1 year, 8 months ago)
read the first 10 pages. like what you have so far. only suggestion is to build up the relationship between beny and evee before they meet. the flashbacks work well but maybe have her look at a picture of them together that jogs her memory? anyhow, keep up good work I'll finish later
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Trent A'Drianon Davis (Sent 1 year, 8 months ago)
I loved it!
  • (5/5 stars)
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Kinsey Hallaway (Sent 1 year, 8 months ago)
Thank you guys! Andrew, I think that keeping their relationship a little secret will be good but I'll see if I can explain it through their actions a little better. They don't actually see each other much in this episode but I'll see what I can do. after a wrote all that I thought of the perfect thing!

Trent, Thanks so much. It's great that people like it so far
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Andrew Del Rosario (Sent 1 year, 8 months ago)
keep up the good work, interested to see the ending!
  • (5/5 stars)
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Trey (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Not very good formatting.
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Kinsey Hallaway (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Hello Trey! Could you give some tips on how to make the formatting better rather than saying it's not very good?
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Dawn Chapman (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Kinsey,

There are many people who will just leave you comments like this. Boy I've had some over the years. What we all need to do is learn to ignore them. I'll p m you with some more stuff. And I'll show you how to format a little better.

Dawn
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Kinsey Hallaway (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Dawn,

Thanks so much for all your help. I really want to make this go somewhere and I could never do it without all my people!

~Kiki
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Dawn Chapman (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Ok so downloaded it to PDF will go through a few, let you see it in a little while.

Dawn
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Kinsey Hallaway (Sent 1 year, 7 months ago)
Thanks Dawn! No need to hurry or anything
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Dawn Chapman (Sent 1 year, 6 months ago)
I really liked it.

Keep at it Kinsey. Hope you are well. What you up to?

D
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Kinsey Hallaway (Sent 1 year, 6 months ago)
Dawn, so glad you finished it. Right now I'm writing a feature and editing one I wrote for script frenzy. After I'm done with that I'll be back to annoying this set of characters.