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Scripts from Same Idea

Nothing here right now.
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(Based on 2 ratings)
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Views: 32
Comments: 8
Created 1 year, 11 months ago
Edited 1 month, 1 week ago
Category: Feature Film
Genres: Drama, Historical, War
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Brian Wasinger (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Let me just say, if nothing else, that this was really creative and a very interesting idea. I would definitely watch this if it were a movie just because it's so damn crazy. I would go back through and clean up the typos. I'm not sure how I feel about calling it The United States of Nazis. That sounds a little forced to me, but that's just my opinion. Also, I was wanting more back story as far as the history of this reality. Overall, it was really refreshing to read something this unique, even if it was a tad idiosyncratic. It would probably turn off your average viewer, but who cares really? Good job.
Brian Wasinger (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
I really liked it.
  • (4/5 stars)
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Chris Cote (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Right at the beginning of page 17 there is a big voice over that gives a bunch of the history of how this "happened". But as for the rest of it goes, it was my intention to let the reader come up with their own version of how things played out.
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Brian Wasinger (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
Right, I know you have that in there but as it is now it feels sort of tacked on. Personally, I would like to see it as a flashback even if it's something as simple as visuals under the VO you have now. It would really help draw the audience into this world you've created and seem less surreal. Again this is just my opinion and I really do mean it as a compliment because you left me wanting more.
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Chris Cote (Sent 1 year, 11 months ago)
I see exactly what you are saying. I think it is an excellent suggestion! I'm going to add something of the sort in. Thanks!
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Riley Maassen (Sent 1 year, 10 months ago)
I really liked it. I like the transition between the opening scene and the following ones. I noticed that you seemed to take United States history and then take away vital parts that wouldn't have happened if the Nazis invaded (well, specifically, the part where it's 1985 and he still calls African Americans niggers.). I don't know if that's what you were shooting for but it worked!
  • (4/5 stars)
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Chris Cote (Sent 1 year, 10 months ago)
Actually, I never thought of it that way. But thanks for the review!
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Chris Cote (Sent 1 year, 9 months ago)
FINISHED!